Malam Jahannam

[boxer_78]

gila ... ceritanya bagus sekali gan ..

 

[Masterganjaz]

wow

 

[suryono86]

Hanyut.. Not just sex story. Good

 

[blegug2]

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[bezoo]

ini cerita kelas berat bro... good job

 

[Nggandhoel]

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meski banyak typo dan terkesan ikut F1 karena long posting-nya... bagus juga ceritanya, layak masuk cerbung.

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[danzega]

Keren nih ceritanya layak jadi sebuah novel hehe. GRP send om. Tapi masih ada beberapa kata yg salah. Ga masalah sih alur cerita dan klimaksnya dapet banget. TOP BGT

 

[BETTS]

suka bgt sama alurny... nyata tanpa ad dialog romantis berlebihan.... Sry lom bisa kasih grp y.... punya usul, buat cerbung sedarah dong ...trims

 

[datra1490]

Mantap ceritanya. ...

 

[bulukumuut]

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[reeseman]

njiiiirrrr...
TS nya bikin gw mw mikir tentang kehidupan yg sebenarnya/realita kehidupan.
nice thread gan..

 

[kuil05]

Based on reality story brader.. Two thumbs for you and salute

keep writings and keeping crot AhuHauHaiaha

 

[casper2707]

Luarrr biasaa.... salut masbro...
Sangat menyentuh,,,dari ngaceng, sampe gw lebih minat baca kisahnya daripada coli

 

[femme]

Huft.. Keren ih.. Ampe nangis,trus gejolak lg.. yg coli siapin antikentang dulu.. Soalny emosiny kebawa.. detailny ampir sempurna.. Antara realita dan ilusi beda tipis.. Te O Pe lah,kakaks.. Cium dulu biar semanget bkin beginian lagi..

 

[selatan]

ngos2an bacanya gan gilak seru abis.....

pertualangan santos berakhir tiwas

 

[inter1701]

Seru ceritanya, thriller

 

[the baculers]

Terharu bgt ane bacanye Gan pd pengen nangiss..keren bgt suer

 

[Born30]

Bagus banget.... Benar2 top dah

 

[wa_1]

Mantap ceritanya.dibuat ftv kayaknya mantap nih..jd semi made in indonesia..hahaha

 

[foolman]

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