gmn klo sci-fi/fantasy suhu?
misal ttg gamer yg terjebak ma game trsebut,ttg yakuza(baca manga sun  rock)bisa juga ttg seorang murid silat. n masih bnyak lg yg ide"yg gk mainstream.ane ad cerita tp bukan esek".
hehehe
Nooo...The Gamer udah ada.
Tapi soal Yakuza ada di cerita ane selanjutnya. Eh bukan Yakuza sih semacam gangster-2 gitulah.
Ini cerita ane ambil pengalaman pribadi waktu ane masih muda dulu. Ane dulu emang anggota salah satu gengster. Pastinya ngena deh hehehe
Bentar ye, masih digodok. Ane kasih bumbu2 mistis nantinya.
umumnya pakai "Hiro... you knocked me out!""Hiro...you make me KO!"
umumnya "it's just me/it's only me" instead "just my feel", kalimatnya jadi "Hiro, It's just me or your dick getting much bigger?""Hiro, just my feel or your dick is much bigger than before?"
frasa "because this is my pure love to you" terasa janggal, "because my love for you is pure" terasa lebih enak suhu."Off course baby, because this is my pure love to you,"
@cumi08: Harusnya udah ngerti dong. Karena itulah ada nama FAIZ. Tapi ini nggak pake ponsel